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Six Sentence Sunday

September 9, 2012

Today I am working on the synopsis and final blurb for Caught Between the Moon and Brooklyn, my friends to lovers story. I am hoping to have it all submitted by Wednesday. Here are the first six sentences…

Kat spun around when her cell phone rang and the stiletto heel on her brand new shoes snapped, knocking her off-balance. She hit the living room floor with a loud thump, grunting as she landed on her tailbone. Her short, sparkly dress twisted around her hips as she struggled to get up and a few sequins fell off when she collided with the coffee table. By the time she reached the phone, it had already gone to voicemail, and she was treated to the missed call beep directly in her ear.

The caller ID told her Dean had called and Kat’s eyebrows furrowed. Dean was supposed to be somewhere swank, spending a very expensive, very exclusive New Year’s Eve with his girlfriend Marine.

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8 Comments leave one →
  1. Jessica Subject permalink
    September 9, 2012 8:33 am

    That’s quite the intro to the story. Definitely makes me want to read more! 🙂

  2. September 9, 2012 8:44 am

    Poor thing! Especially if HE is the one on the other end of the line. 🙂 A very intriguing start to the story.

  3. September 9, 2012 10:16 am

    Doesn’t sound like a good night for her. Hope Dean makes it a whole lot better.

  4. September 9, 2012 11:08 am

    When one thing goes wrong, there is no stopping the dominos. Great six!

  5. September 9, 2012 11:18 am

    Ouchie! Fab introduction, and wishing you all the best with your submission! 🙂

  6. September 9, 2012 12:50 pm

    Fab bump and fall, I fell right with her. You’ve given us a nice setup here, leaving me wanting more. I hope you send it all out on Wednesday too 🙂

  7. Monica Enderle Pierce permalink
    September 9, 2012 1:54 pm

    Great action and wonderful intrigue. I’d keep reading!

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