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Six Sentence Sunday

June 24, 2012

Here are another six from my friends-to-lovers WiP.

Kat turned toward him and their eyes met. Tension gathered in the air between them, thick, palpable, electric.

Dean dipped his head, his mouth hovering just over hers. “I want to kiss you so badly,” he said, his normally rich voice husky and strained.

Her gaze flicked from his eyes down to his lips and her heart jackhammered in her chest. “What’s stopping you?”

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27 Comments leave one →
  1. June 24, 2012 8:15 am

    Oh YES, husky and strained. Great six and fantastic image, he’s HOT

  2. June 24, 2012 8:58 am

    Great imagery in this six! I love that moment of hesitation right before a kiss 🙂

  3. Jessica Subject permalink
    June 24, 2012 9:11 am

    I’d say the same thing. Go for it! 🙂 Great six, Lisa!

  4. June 24, 2012 9:27 am

    Oh, wow. With that kind of chemistry, this friendship is going to morph quite beautifully into a very sexy love story! Your description of their body language is excellent. Great six, Lisa.

  5. June 24, 2012 9:40 am

    *fans face* That was lovely. Now I’m wishing this was Sixteen Sentence Sunday — I want more of that kiss!

  6. June 24, 2012 9:54 am

    Yeah, baby, I say go for it. Woo Hoo!

  7. June 24, 2012 10:23 am

    Wonderful build-up. So hot and they haven’t even kissed yet.

  8. June 24, 2012 10:47 am

    Just do it! Love the tension. Makes me one happy lady. 🙂

  9. June 24, 2012 10:47 am

    Oh I love this. I can feel the tension between them and I love her response in the end. Great six!

  10. June 24, 2012 11:01 am

    You had me on the edge of my chair! The sexy tension is perfect!! Well done.

  11. June 24, 2012 11:22 am

    Go for it and risk losing a friend or hold back and spend the rest of their lives wondering? Hmmm. Grand six.

  12. June 24, 2012 11:53 am

    Smoldering six! I love the tension.

  13. June 24, 2012 12:08 pm

    He is a nice guy! I could visualize that little hesitation moment and my heartbeat went up – very effective six! I want MORE of the story today, not next Sunday LOL!

  14. June 24, 2012 12:10 pm

    I love friends to lovers stories! Lots of tension and yearning in this six! Great job!

  15. June 24, 2012 12:18 pm

    More. Now, please.

  16. Wildcat's Wife permalink
    June 24, 2012 1:17 pm

    Husky indeed! This snippet sizzles and sparks!

  17. June 24, 2012 2:29 pm

    Great tension in this snippet. Great job Lisa!

  18. June 24, 2012 2:31 pm

    Definitely want more of that!

  19. June 24, 2012 2:38 pm

    Love friends-to-lovers!!! Kiss her already damn it!

  20. June 24, 2012 2:54 pm

    Great lead-in to a passionate kiss.

  21. June 24, 2012 6:23 pm

    I LOVE friends-to-lovers stories! And this excerpt show such tension and chemistry. Well done!

  22. June 24, 2012 6:24 pm

    Yes, what’s stopping you?! Great tension and description!

  23. June 24, 2012 8:26 pm

    thick, palpable, electric.
    Love this! So sexy…

  24. June 25, 2012 8:47 am

    Love friends-to-lovers stories! And when his voice turns husky and strained. Oo la la. 🙂

  25. July 16, 2012 4:37 pm

    Very good question!


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