Six Sentence Sunday
May 20, 2012
I am immersed in edits and a brand new project, so this week you get another golden oldie six from Sculpting a Demon.
Arien stretched out on the floor, crossed his long legs at the ankles and propped his head up on his hand. “So, where are we going?” he asked, and if it was at all possible, his smile grew wider.
Lila grunted. “Don’t be so smug, you’re only coming ’cause I don’t have time to argue with you.”
“Of course.”
“Right,” she muttered, and rolled her eyes, “of course.”
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Lisa Fox Romance 
Arien is just so hot! Love this story! 🙂
This is a case where smug works out just fine, I think. 🙂
I really like the back and forth between these two, it’s a good example of authentic sounding dialogue.
Great dialogue, I can hear their tone of voice.
I love the banter between them! Great six 😀
LOL Love it! These two are great.
Fab dialogue, Lisa!
Great banter between these two!
Oh he’s a confident guy indeed, will be fun to watch the developments! Great six, loved the “voice”!
Gotta love a confident man! 🙂 Great six!
Terrific dialogue..loved his humor 🙂
LOL fun dialogue!
Love his humor. He seems very comfortable with himself. Sexy pic.
Great six. I like the sarcasm in the dialog.
Cute, cute! Does he love tormenting her? LOL!
Nearly got distracted by the pic! Great six 🙂
These two sound like fun! Great six!
Love his smug attitude here. They sound like a fun couple!
Fun six. Of course. 😉
I like their chemistry. He’s a confident bloke; wonder how long he can maintain that. And I wonder how long she can pretend she doesn’t like it.
Oo, lots going on beneath the surface here. Nice work!
I’m picturing him in what they call in my neck of the woods, “a shit-eatin’ grin”. 😉
LOL, I was going to say the same as Gem about the grin.
That photo – there’s not enough fat on him to grease a pan. 🙂
Great combination here of verbal and nonverbals. Their chemistry is great. Fantastic six!
I agree with the other comments, the chemistry between them works really well!
That pic says it all, doesn’t it? Love the chemestry here!
His torment of her is palpable! And the picture you picked doesn’t hurt to set the mood. 😉
Lol! Love their banter! They sound like an explosive couple 🙂
Nice pic to go with a great six!
Entertaining dialogue, Lisa. It will be fun to see who has the upper hand here.
(giggles) Great six!