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Six Sentence Sunday

May 20, 2012

I am immersed in edits and a brand new project, so this week you get another golden oldie six from Sculpting a Demon.

Arien stretched out on the floor, crossed his long legs at the ankles and propped his head up on his hand. “So, where are we going?” he asked, and if it was at all possible, his smile grew wider.

Lila grunted. “Don’t be so smug, you’re only coming ’cause I don’t have time to argue with you.”

“Of course.”

“Right,” she muttered, and rolled her eyes, “of course.”

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30 Comments leave one →
  1. Jessica Subject permalink
    May 20, 2012 8:16 am

    Arien is just so hot! Love this story! 🙂

  2. May 20, 2012 8:52 am

    This is a case where smug works out just fine, I think. 🙂

  3. May 20, 2012 8:56 am

    I really like the back and forth between these two, it’s a good example of authentic sounding dialogue.

  4. May 20, 2012 8:59 am

    Great dialogue, I can hear their tone of voice.

  5. May 20, 2012 9:17 am

    I love the banter between them! Great six 😀

  6. May 20, 2012 9:40 am

    LOL Love it! These two are great.

    Fab dialogue, Lisa!

  7. May 20, 2012 9:42 am

    Great banter between these two!

  8. May 20, 2012 9:53 am

    Oh he’s a confident guy indeed, will be fun to watch the developments! Great six, loved the “voice”!

  9. May 20, 2012 10:11 am

    Gotta love a confident man! 🙂 Great six!

  10. May 20, 2012 10:17 am

    Terrific dialogue..loved his humor 🙂

  11. laurakayeauthor permalink
    May 20, 2012 11:12 am

    LOL fun dialogue!

  12. May 20, 2012 11:27 am

    Love his humor. He seems very comfortable with himself. Sexy pic.

  13. May 20, 2012 12:04 pm

    Great six. I like the sarcasm in the dialog.

  14. Wildcat's Wife permalink
    May 20, 2012 12:16 pm

    Cute, cute! Does he love tormenting her? LOL!

  15. May 20, 2012 12:18 pm

    Nearly got distracted by the pic! Great six 🙂

  16. May 20, 2012 12:43 pm

    These two sound like fun! Great six!

  17. May 20, 2012 1:36 pm

    Love his smug attitude here. They sound like a fun couple!

  18. May 20, 2012 2:02 pm

    Fun six. Of course. 😉

  19. Monica Enderle Pierce permalink
    May 20, 2012 2:22 pm

    I like their chemistry. He’s a confident bloke; wonder how long he can maintain that. And I wonder how long she can pretend she doesn’t like it.

  20. May 20, 2012 2:56 pm

    Oo, lots going on beneath the surface here. Nice work!

  21. Gem permalink
    May 20, 2012 3:01 pm

    I’m picturing him in what they call in my neck of the woods, “a shit-eatin’ grin”. 😉

  22. May 20, 2012 3:59 pm

    LOL, I was going to say the same as Gem about the grin.

    That photo – there’s not enough fat on him to grease a pan. 🙂

  23. May 20, 2012 5:05 pm

    Great combination here of verbal and nonverbals. Their chemistry is great. Fantastic six!

  24. May 20, 2012 5:22 pm

    I agree with the other comments, the chemistry between them works really well!

  25. May 20, 2012 7:39 pm

    That pic says it all, doesn’t it? Love the chemestry here!

  26. May 20, 2012 10:17 pm

    His torment of her is palpable! And the picture you picked doesn’t hurt to set the mood. 😉

  27. May 21, 2012 1:03 am

    Lol! Love their banter! They sound like an explosive couple 🙂

  28. Jennifer Lowery permalink
    May 21, 2012 2:29 pm

    Nice pic to go with a great six!

  29. May 21, 2012 9:22 pm

    Entertaining dialogue, Lisa. It will be fun to see who has the upper hand here.

  30. June 1, 2012 11:44 pm

    (giggles) Great six!

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