Six Sentence Sunday
July 31, 2011
Here are the opening lines to the lust demon thing I’m playing around with.
The deep, melodic trance music vibrated through Trask’s body, teasing and caressing his already hypersensitive cock as he prowled the crowded dance floor. He was hungry, so very, very hungry, and the time had come for him to find a willing partner for the night. Any one of the mortals undulating around him would have sufficed, but so far, none of them appealed to him. The need gnawed at his insides, but Trask waited, searching for the one. It paid to be a little bit discriminating. It always made the feast so much more gratifying.
(Doesn’t he just look like his name should be Trask?)
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Now why am I suddenly obsessed with breakfast? Great Six, Lisa.
He sounds (and looks) deadly, dangerous and sexy as hell. Wow, what a description.
The need gnawd…
arrh I’m looking forward to when he finds the one. Fantastically written six! Thank you
Fabulous six, Lisa! Especially like the last line!
Oo! Oo! Pick me! Sexy six, Lisa!
Whew! Hot six! Thanks for sharing.
Wow, great snippet and sexy picture. loved it!
Oh, yumm, that is one lusty vampire.
whoo-hoo – sexy six and sexy pic
Nice! Sounds like whoever the lucky guy/gal is they’ll be in for a treat.
Wonderfully evocative. Great internal conflict.
I love the first line. It really pulled me in. I wonder who he’ll pick…
Great six, he’s needy but choosy too!
Hot and dangerous all at one time! Wow!
ohh, Trask sounds sexy as hell and intense. Gimme gimme! 😀
Nice six!
The feast? Can’t decide if you’d want to be the one or not. Either way I want to know what happens!
Oh – this was very very very nice! Intense, dangerous and HOT!
Lisa–That is some fantastic descriptive writing and i am so impressed. Want more
That was a scrumptious 6 and the pic…perfect.
LOL Lust demon thing – you dork.
I love this! Way to drag the reader in
The feast…nice. Enjoyed your six.
OH, Lisa, this is GOOD. He is HOT – want more!
The picture is very evocative. I could see him throbbing through the club on the prowl.
Well written, sensual, hot and jus a tad ever so creepy!
The hawtness in the picture is the reason I got in so much trouble growing up. Always wanted the bad boys in black. *thud*
Awesome description and intro! You have a winner here, Lisa. 🙂
Wow! Great insight into this character. 🙂
I love how intense he sounds. Yummy.
Oh my. Whoever he picks is going to love it, if they survive! Can’t wait to see how it plays out.
Oh my lordy! Hot!! I hope he picks me!!
Awesome! He can prowl my way anytime! Well written six!
Now that is a very sexy bad boy! Rawr!
Wow – that’s some opening. Great snippet!
I love that first line, that music eggs on his arousal. Very hot!
Hmm, Lust Demon. A fascinating concept…but, um, does he kill when mating? Intriguing six!
Delicious snippet! I hope we get to read about his feast next week. So captivating.
You always deliver!! Beautifully written!
Yeah, loving the sound of this, Lisa! I hope you continue it 🙂
Nice!! Cannot wait for more, to see if he finds someone that quenches his desires.
Awesome!