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July 31, 2011

Here are the opening lines to the lust demon thing I’m playing around with.

The deep, melodic trance music vibrated through Trask’s body, teasing and caressing his already hypersensitive cock as he prowled the crowded dance floor. He was hungry, so very, very hungry, and the time had come for him to find a willing partner for the night. Any one of the mortals undulating around him would have sufficed, but so far, none of them appealed to him. The need gnawed at his insides, but Trask waited, searching for the one. It paid to be a little bit discriminating. It always made the feast so much more gratifying.

 (Doesn’t he just look like his name should be Trask?)


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40 Comments leave one →
  1. July 31, 2011 8:32 am

    Now why am I suddenly obsessed with breakfast? Great Six, Lisa.

  2. July 31, 2011 8:54 am

    He sounds (and looks) deadly, dangerous and sexy as hell. Wow, what a description.

  3. July 31, 2011 8:56 am

    The need gnawd…
    arrh I’m looking forward to when he finds the one. Fantastically written six! Thank you

  4. July 31, 2011 9:02 am

    Fabulous six, Lisa! Especially like the last line!

  5. Randi Alexander permalink
    July 31, 2011 9:06 am

    Oo! Oo! Pick me! Sexy six, Lisa!

  6. Jennifer Lowery~Writer permalink
    July 31, 2011 9:14 am

    Whew! Hot six! Thanks for sharing.

  7. July 31, 2011 9:38 am

    Wow, great snippet and sexy picture. loved it!

  8. July 31, 2011 9:53 am

    Oh, yumm, that is one lusty vampire.

  9. July 31, 2011 10:02 am

    whoo-hoo – sexy six and sexy pic

  10. July 31, 2011 10:13 am

    Nice! Sounds like whoever the lucky guy/gal is they’ll be in for a treat.

  11. July 31, 2011 10:16 am

    Wonderfully evocative. Great internal conflict.

  12. July 31, 2011 10:17 am

    I love the first line. It really pulled me in. I wonder who he’ll pick…

  13. July 31, 2011 10:28 am

    Great six, he’s needy but choosy too!

  14. July 31, 2011 10:31 am

    Hot and dangerous all at one time! Wow!

  15. July 31, 2011 10:31 am

    ohh, Trask sounds sexy as hell and intense. Gimme gimme! 😀
    Nice six!

  16. Eleri Stone permalink
    July 31, 2011 10:40 am

    The feast? Can’t decide if you’d want to be the one or not. Either way I want to know what happens!

  17. July 31, 2011 10:40 am

    Oh – this was very very very nice! Intense, dangerous and HOT!

  18. July 31, 2011 10:40 am

    Lisa–That is some fantastic descriptive writing and i am so impressed. Want more

  19. July 31, 2011 10:42 am

    That was a scrumptious 6 and the pic…perfect.

  20. July 31, 2011 10:42 am

    LOL Lust demon thing – you dork.
    I love this! Way to drag the reader in

  21. July 31, 2011 11:08 am

    The feast…nice. Enjoyed your six.

  22. July 31, 2011 11:18 am

    OH, Lisa, this is GOOD. He is HOT – want more!

  23. July 31, 2011 11:47 am

    The picture is very evocative. I could see him throbbing through the club on the prowl.

  24. July 31, 2011 11:56 am

    Well written, sensual, hot and jus a tad ever so creepy!

  25. July 31, 2011 12:34 pm

    The hawtness in the picture is the reason I got in so much trouble growing up. Always wanted the bad boys in black. *thud*

  26. July 31, 2011 12:59 pm

    Awesome description and intro! You have a winner here, Lisa. 🙂

  27. July 31, 2011 1:39 pm

    Wow! Great insight into this character. 🙂

  28. July 31, 2011 1:43 pm

    I love how intense he sounds. Yummy.

  29. July 31, 2011 2:06 pm

    Oh my. Whoever he picks is going to love it, if they survive! Can’t wait to see how it plays out.

  30. July 31, 2011 2:21 pm

    Oh my lordy! Hot!! I hope he picks me!!

  31. Siobhan Muir permalink
    July 31, 2011 2:26 pm

    Awesome! He can prowl my way anytime! Well written six!

  32. July 31, 2011 3:43 pm

    Now that is a very sexy bad boy! Rawr!

  33. July 31, 2011 3:53 pm

    Wow – that’s some opening. Great snippet!

  34. July 31, 2011 4:46 pm

    I love that first line, that music eggs on his arousal. Very hot!

  35. July 31, 2011 6:44 pm

    Hmm, Lust Demon. A fascinating concept…but, um, does he kill when mating? Intriguing six!

  36. Heather Thurmeier permalink
    July 31, 2011 6:56 pm

    Delicious snippet! I hope we get to read about his feast next week. So captivating.

  37. Stacey Kennedy permalink
    July 31, 2011 8:11 pm

    You always deliver!! Beautifully written!

  38. August 1, 2011 1:17 pm

    Yeah, loving the sound of this, Lisa! I hope you continue it 🙂

  39. August 1, 2011 4:11 pm

    Nice!! Cannot wait for more, to see if he finds someone that quenches his desires.

  40. August 5, 2011 12:47 am


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