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Six Sentence Sunday

January 30, 2011

This week I have another little taste of my Sky Pirate tale for you.

She reached for something on the top shelf of one of the cupboards that lined the kitchen and the back of her sweater rose, revealing a glimpse of perfect ivory skin, the delicate arc of her lower back. Daric’s mouth went dry and his heart thudded in his chest. To be able to kiss that very spot, to run his tongue over the gentle curve of her spine, to taste her undoubtedly soft, warm skin, to…

“If you’re coming in, then come in,” she said, startling him out of his very pleasant train of thought. “Don’t just hover there like a specter.”

(Sorry this isn’t my usual sexy picture this week, but I found this “pirate” and it made me laugh so hard I just had to share it. It probably wouldn’t be so bad if he wasn’t so damn serious.)

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32 Comments leave one →
  1. Dawne Prochilo permalink
    January 30, 2011 8:19 am

    Oh my… to kiss that spot… to have a man want to do that…sigh- great excerpt Lisa- love the innuendo of “are you coming in?”…what man could say no?

  2. January 30, 2011 8:20 am

    lol, I like it!

  3. January 30, 2011 8:43 am

    From the seductive description of her lower back, to hover like a specter, I love it. Great lines this week.

  4. January 30, 2011 8:54 am

    “to be able to kiss that very spot…” sigh.
    Wonderful.
    (And the sky pirate is hilarious. Gives new meaning to “commando.”)

  5. January 30, 2011 9:01 am

    The six were great. very sensual. The words are luscious. The pic…uh, He must be having a banana for lunch. LOL

  6. January 30, 2011 9:26 am

    *snicker* Busted!

  7. January 30, 2011 9:36 am

    Nice, enticing words and I love this pic – those tights…um , they reveal a lot…who even cares that he has a serious face!

  8. Kerrianne permalink
    January 30, 2011 9:42 am

    He wants her! LOL

  9. hthurmeier permalink
    January 30, 2011 9:43 am

    Wow! This is awesome. I’m not sure I’ve ever read a “sky pirate” novel before, but I’d be happy to make this one my first!

  10. January 30, 2011 10:09 am

    Wow, to go from Daric’s thoughts to that pirate picture… words fail me. hehe

  11. January 30, 2011 10:18 am

    Don’t hover there like a specter. I love it.

  12. leighellwood permalink
    January 30, 2011 11:18 am

    Nicely written, thanks for sharing!

  13. January 30, 2011 11:25 am

    Very vivid and beautifully written. And the pic is hilarious. Those tights are…um…tight.

  14. January 30, 2011 11:44 am

    Love her character! I think this pirate is in trouble.

    Yeah, those tights in the pic are very tight.

  15. January 30, 2011 11:58 am

    Great post!

  16. January 30, 2011 1:32 pm

    Love those scenes where the oddest curve is so tempting…really builds the heat slowly that way!

  17. January 30, 2011 1:43 pm

    Love the pirate picture, I almost spit my tea all over the place. Love the six as well:)

  18. January 30, 2011 2:00 pm

    *Laughing* @ Taryn’s commando comment. Oh my, yes!

    Love his total focus on the skin of her lower back as a turn-on. Great tension in the scene. And I love her confidence.

    More next week, please?

  19. January 30, 2011 2:05 pm

    I love strong women like this. Tell the guy what to do! 😉

  20. January 30, 2011 2:06 pm

    Love the visuals going through his head and her unintentional innuendo! Plus the pirate? Too funny!

  21. January 30, 2011 2:25 pm

    Wonderfully descriptive, loved this. And the pic is hilarious, thanks for sharing. 🙂

  22. January 30, 2011 2:38 pm

    Being a sky pirate is hard work! LOL

  23. January 30, 2011 3:03 pm

    Love this – especially ‘to kiss that very spot’

  24. January 30, 2011 3:04 pm

    ok ha ha on the pirate but ohh he wants her bad on the tease you posted

  25. January 30, 2011 4:22 pm

    Yes, no wasting her time! LOL. Loved it.

  26. January 30, 2011 9:21 pm

    Love it, Lisa! Can’t wait to read more fromt his wip. 😀

  27. evecassidy permalink
    January 30, 2011 10:26 pm

    Very very nice.

  28. January 31, 2011 2:33 am

    I don’t think he will be hovering! 🙂

  29. Roxy permalink
    January 31, 2011 4:33 pm

    Ahoy! It’s Lumpy the Pirate! Arrrghhh!

  30. January 31, 2011 6:27 pm

    LOL apparently, the photo made him laugh…and get hard. Oh dear. hehe

    Great snippet this week, from sensual to snarky..fun!

  31. February 1, 2011 1:07 am

    Great tension here! Looks like he is gonna be in a little agony for a bit! lOL

  32. February 2, 2011 12:36 am

    LOL The pirate is too funny. I really liked the last line of your excerpt.

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