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Six Sentence Sunday

September 11, 2011

This week’s sentences are from MOONLIGHT AND MERLOT, the weekly, paranormal, soap opera, serial story I do.

The sun rose high and bright over Dion Valley the next morning. In fact, it was such a beautiful day one could almost believe nothing was amiss at all.

Of course, Lela knew better, but it was nice to believe that everything was fine and normal. She felt so good snuggled in Nick’s arms, naked and warm in his bed with the sunlight streaming through the slightly parted curtains. She breathed in the fresh morning air, savoring the scents of sun and grass and grapes, and wished that this moment could go on and on forever. There were few things she could imagine that would be more wonderful.

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  1. September 11, 2011 8:25 am

    Aww, such a calm moment, but I think things might get a little wild if the heroine has anything to say about it.

    And such a hot pic!

  2. Heather Thurmeier permalink
    September 11, 2011 8:25 am

    Love the title, love the snippet! The tushy picture is okay too. ;)

  3. September 11, 2011 8:33 am

    I can imagine great things with that picture as inspiration. Wake him up!

  4. September 11, 2011 8:48 am

    Your words were enough to make me want to be curled up in the bed. The pic sealed the deal. Very sexy.

  5. September 11, 2011 9:19 am

    What a perfect way to start the day :)

  6. September 11, 2011 9:36 am

    Great six! And OMG that pic is what every girl wants to see 1st thing in the a.m. I so wanna squeeze that bottom!! :P

  7. September 11, 2011 10:06 am

    Sublime description. And totally squeezable butt!

  8. Xakara permalink
    September 11, 2011 10:09 am

    I don’t even know him, and the moment sounds wonderful! :)

    ~Xakara
    PsiCorps #3

  9. September 11, 2011 10:15 am

    Beautifully descriptive six Lisa, l can smell the grass and he grapes!

  10. September 11, 2011 10:30 am

    Lovely romantic morning after.

  11. September 11, 2011 10:54 am

    lovely, tender scene… and love that eye candy!

  12. September 11, 2011 12:28 pm

    Sounds wonderful. Lovely snippet!

  13. September 11, 2011 12:57 pm

    Very nice 6. And hot damn, that model has an awesome bum.

  14. September 11, 2011 1:02 pm

    Beautiful six, an absolute pleasure to read.

  15. September 11, 2011 5:30 pm

    Loved how you brought so many senses into this scene- from the sounds to smells around her

  16. September 11, 2011 6:10 pm

    I want to know what’s amiss. I have the feeling it’s the opposite of the awesomeness of being in bed with a sexy guy,

  17. September 11, 2011 6:12 pm

    Love the snippet. What a great way to start the day, until….

  18. September 11, 2011 6:27 pm

    Beautiful description of that early morning calm — before the reality of the day intrudes. But is this the calm before the storm? (BTW, love the buns — Mmmm. Warm buns in the morning.)

  19. September 11, 2011 6:35 pm

    Has to be the best way to wake up! Very sweet six.

  20. September 11, 2011 8:41 pm

    Umm… How do you expect me to focus on your six when you post such delicious pictures of hot tushes? Lol! After tearing my eyes aways from that I got to read your six sentences and I gotta say they rock as much as the pic. Great six!

  21. September 11, 2011 9:02 pm

    I couldn’t imagine too many things more wonderful than having that tush in my bed.

    Loved the six as well! ;)

  22. Eleri Stone permalink
    September 11, 2011 10:25 pm

    I dunno, that picture’s pretty wonderful too. So are these six.

  23. September 11, 2011 10:30 pm

    I really love the use of scents in stories, and your “scents of sun and grass and grapes” captivated me. great six!

  24. September 12, 2011 1:01 am

    Oh, that sounds lovely! And I adore serials. Used to write in a paranormal soap type serial myself before I was pubbed.

  25. September 12, 2011 1:19 am

    Good six, Lisa.

    eden

  26. September 12, 2011 1:12 pm

    Awesome six, Lisa! And as usual… delicious photo! :)

  27. September 12, 2011 3:17 pm

    This sounds like the calm before the storm.

  28. September 12, 2011 8:15 pm

    Hahahah! I had the exact same thought as Sherry Gloag!

  29. September 13, 2011 4:00 am

    Such a peaceful and lovely moment! :)

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